Persuasive writing

This term we have been learning about persuasive writing  

Is summer better than winter?

Do you think people will think that summer is better? Remember when it’s summer you get to do fun things and go swimming. 

Everyone knows that Summer is better because you get to do more fun things and not have to worry about the rain or coldness. In summer you get a natural  tan instead of having to fake tan in winter.

 It is clear that Summer is way better because when it’s summer you get to swim all day. Many people know that  summer is better because when it’s summer you get to go swimming and you get to have ice cream. When it’s summer you get to go out to your friends and hang out outside with them all day long.

Obviously In winter you have to get flu shots and you get sick easily unlike in summer you’re fine and don’t get sick.In Winter you get no tan and you have to  fake tan unlike summer. SUMMER IS BETTER BECAUSE IT ISSS. What do you think is better: Summer or winter??

As you can see I have highlighted  some main reasons why summer is good, like natural tan, not getting sick and swimming all day. Do you think my reasons are right and is summer better than winter? 

beach ed

On Tuesday the 20th of february group 2 went to the beach ed. To get There we had to walk from school to south Brighton lifesaving club.When we got there we got given a tour of the club house, after the tour we had to put our bags in the changing rooms. Then after that we had to split into groups to do different activities. We learnt about the irb,rescue boards and the first aid kits. They told us to always swim in the flags and never swim out the flags. If you do swim out the flags you could get stuck in a rip. 

 

The Enchanted Treehouse

Tucked away in the deep deep woods was  a old abandoned magnificent tree house .Nova who was a normal girl Decided to go explore The  treehouse.Walking to the woods she spotted a goblin under bridge.Nova started sprinting away from the bridge.Nova was at the beginning  and out of breath.She had a snack and something to drink then started heading back.Everything was going well it was beautiful outside and nothing could go wrong. She was out of breath but didn’t give up.Almost there just a few more steps.She made it tree house successfully.As she walked in BOOM.. 

A bomb exploded but she was fine. She  quickly got up and fixed herself. She turn her torchlight on and stared exploring.